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Medicine Personal Statement Review 2021

Reviewed by experts
Get feedback from those who know what medical schools want to see

Quantitative mark scheme used
Our experts use a mark scheme to ensure your personal statement is perfect

Get feedback within 48 hours
Fast feedback to give you plenty of time to improve 

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A good short and honest introduction, which differs from the generic reasons of choosing to study medicine.

When using buzzwords such as ‘holistically’ be prepared to be able to expand on this in future interviews. 

It is great you highlighted that you organized the work experience placements yourself, as this shows resilience and commitment – important traits of a doctor.

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Line by Line Feedback

You will receive personalised feedback with a written report that will go over how to precisely improve your personal statement. You will be scored on various factors and be given line-by-line guidance on how to make your personal statement immaculate.

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You can further reflect here by linking this to your involvement in the school’s debating society and how you have improved your communication skills.

This could be made more concise by instead choosing to reflect on one work experience placement in depth as opposed to listing your experiences.

Insight

You briefly explained what you learned from the hospital, this can be further improved using the STARR framework – Situation, Task, Action Result & Reflection

Experience Personalised Learning Like Never Before

We use a quantitative mark scheme that allows us to quantify your personal statement to easily highlight your strengths and weaknesses. In addition to this, you will get detailed feedback for the universities of your choice so you can show how you are the student they want. 

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Write, Review, Refine

Whether it is your first, third or ninth draft, send us your personal statement and we will give you feedback within 2 days. After implementing our feedback, you will have the opportunity to send over another draft for us to review.

This will ensure it is perfect before you send it off to your medical school. We will make sure it has the best voice, tone and content so you can impress the admissions tutors. 

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1-on-1 Interactive Video Calls

We can help you create your personal statement via our 1-on-1 service. You will be matched with a hand picked expert who will help you brainstorm ideas using what your life experiences have taught you. From there, your tutor will help you create a personal statement from start to finish that will give you the best chances of success. 

Through Google Meet Video Calls, you will have the opportunity to over your personal statement with one of our experts so you can get
live feedback on how to improve and ask any questions.

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Line by Line Feedback

Tailored to your Medical Schools

1:1 Coaching per Review

Progress Metrics & Analysis

Bespoke Whatsapp Group

General, Graduate & Oxbridge

1 Reviews (£40 per review)

1 x 30 Minute 1:1 Sessions

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