Medicine Personal Statement Review 2023
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A good short and honest introduction, which differs from the generic reasons of choosing to study medicine.
When using buzzwords such as ‘holistically’ be prepared to be able to expand on this in future interviews.
It is great you highlighted that you organized the work experience placements yourself, as this shows resilience and commitment – important traits of a doctor.
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You can further reflect here by linking this to your involvement in the school’s debating society and how you have improved your communication skills.
This could be made more concise by instead choosing to reflect on one work experience placement in depth as opposed to listing your experiences.
You briefly explained what you learned from the hospital, this can be further improved using the STARR framework – Situation, Task, Action Result & Reflection